This blog has the purpose of providing my work and process for my concentration. I'm basing my theme on abstract body with a target towards the human eye. Along with all the complexity and abstraction with the full body as well.For my shots I will use a variety of scene selection such as marcro,landscape and portrait. Also I will use a number of designs as space, leading lines and rule of thirds. All my work will be submitted onto this page for you all to gaze your eyeballs upon.
Nice work!I really like the strong lighting and sharp lines that you have throughout your concentration. I also like the order in which you have the pictures. The one thing I might change is the picture with the super white teeth, it doesn't match your other photos as well, but I really like the shape in it.
Your series is gorgeous! You have an amazing sense of light and emphasis in all of your photos. There also seems to be a similar tone/atmosphere in all of the photos that make them seem very natural and organic because of the subject matter and the lighting/color. My only suggestion would be to maybe play around with contrast and shadows in the 6th image. The color just appears a little flat compared to the others. But you did wonderful work so be proud :)
Very powerful. I love the collarbone/ shoulder shot! I also really liked your earlier work with the fingers reaching towards the camera, I would think about including those in if you would like
Abby, you know I hate you because your pictures are all wonderful. I love how clear every picture is, and how they all compliment and show the human body in a different way than we normally see it. I honestly have no critiques. I think you have done all you can with it, and it is wonderful.
I love your series! I can tell you have a great eye for light. I like how each photo has the same feeling like a natural feeling. On your 4th photo I think it would of looked good if you flipped it so it looked like the other ones. But besides that great job! (:
Abby- All of these photos are amazing! They are extrememly clear and have very interesting points of view. It is really easy to tell that you are the artist with the similar lighting and backgrounds. When you are putting your photos in order, I would split up the eye photos. Great job!
Love the series! They are all so clear and wondefully taken. Great lighting on each one and abstraction. They are all so strong and I would not change one thing on them.
I cant believe how much detail you were able to capture in all of your pictures, its mind blowing. I however think that mabey you could play around with the order you have them in?
Wow, tons of detail in your photos!! I love it!! They're so incredibly clear, nice job!! Your photos almost make the body look dirty, but it's awesome! The only thing I suggest you do is play around with the order, and maybe eliminate one of the pictures of eyes, and put another strong photo in, just to get a little more variety. But very well done!
Abby I really loved your concentration. You did an amazing job in being able to make it clear, as well to distort the images. As well I liked the editing in the pictures. Over all you did an amazing job!
Your concentration is so beautifully put together, Abby! You show great attention to detail, appropriate lighting, and the clarity in each image is absolutely breathtaking. The first image is by far my favorite. The abstraction is gorgeous and the mood created is mind blowing. I don't have any suggestions for changes; I think your final series is wonderful as is!
Nice work!I really like the strong lighting and sharp lines that you have throughout your concentration. I also like the order in which you have the pictures. The one thing I might change is the picture with the super white teeth, it doesn't match your other photos as well, but I really like the shape in it.
ReplyDeleteYour series is gorgeous! You have an amazing sense of light and emphasis in all of your photos. There also seems to be a similar tone/atmosphere in all of the photos that make them seem very natural and organic because of the subject matter and the lighting/color. My only suggestion would be to maybe play around with contrast and shadows in the 6th image. The color just appears a little flat compared to the others. But you did wonderful work so be proud :)
ReplyDeleteVery powerful. I love the collarbone/ shoulder shot! I also really liked your earlier work with the fingers reaching towards the camera, I would think about including those in if you would like
ReplyDeleteAbby, you know I hate you because your pictures are all wonderful. I love how clear every picture is, and how they all compliment and show the human body in a different way than we normally see it. I honestly have no critiques. I think you have done all you can with it, and it is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteI love your series! I can tell you have a great eye for light. I like how each photo has the same feeling like a natural feeling. On your 4th photo I think it would of looked good if you flipped it so it looked like the other ones. But besides that great job! (:
ReplyDeleteYour photos are perfect! I love the eye pictures, they are super powerful. I really can 't find anything to critique on.
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ReplyDeleteAll of these photos are amazing! They are extrememly clear and have very interesting points of view. It is really easy to tell that you are the artist with the similar lighting and backgrounds. When you are putting your photos in order, I would split up the eye photos. Great job!
Love the series! They are all so clear and wondefully taken. Great lighting on each one and abstraction. They are all so strong and I would not change one thing on them.
ReplyDeleteYour phtotos are amazing! The detail shown in each picture is so clear. There is nothing I would really suggest improvement on. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI cant believe how much detail you were able to capture in all of your pictures, its mind blowing. I however think that mabey you could play around with the order you have them in?
ReplyDeleteWow, tons of detail in your photos!! I love it!! They're so incredibly clear, nice job!! Your photos almost make the body look dirty, but it's awesome! The only thing I suggest you do is play around with the order, and maybe eliminate one of the pictures of eyes, and put another strong photo in, just to get a little more variety. But very well done!
ReplyDeleteAbby I really loved your concentration. You did an amazing job in being able to make it clear, as well to distort the images. As well I liked the editing in the pictures. Over all you did an amazing job!
ReplyDeleteYour concentration is so beautifully put together, Abby! You show great attention to detail, appropriate lighting, and the clarity in each image is absolutely breathtaking. The first image is by far my favorite. The abstraction is gorgeous and the mood created is mind blowing. I don't have any suggestions for changes; I think your final series is wonderful as is!
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